LightMoon new RiverClanner

[SilverStar1971]

Name:MoonPool Age:16moons Gender:She-Cat Clan:RiverClan Rank:Warrior Appereantice: Personally:Sweet,Fun,Caring,Wants to have kits,gracefull,if she in a bad mood she would very much kill you if you were in her way in this she is always getting a sweet mood she trys not to be grumpy,strong,kind,smart,swift,funny History:She was born in RiverClan and always loved it and when they had a battle with thunder clan she was horrifed and that is one of the reasons she is so strong RP Sample:MoonPool sat outside the warriors den looking at the moon

[Hawkstar]

I can't accept this until you write about her appearance. Also, just a note, an RP sample in a profile is often a short paragraph, not one sentence.